Good day everyone, and welcome to day 4 of the A-Z Challenge. Thanks for stopping by and reading my contribution to this fun blogging event. Please feel free to stay as long as you like, then jump on over to see what the other participants are blogging about.
Now on to the letter D. From my YA novel, The Eye of Kedge, it gives me great pleasure to introduce you to David Alwyn Heiland, one of three main protagonists. Charlotte you met yesterday, David is today, and Eric follows tomorrow. Anyone interested to see how I envision David? Click on the little guy below to find out.
David was born March 31 and is almost 18 years old, extremely wealthy and lives with his godmother, Lily, in an 1860’s mansion in Havendale, Tennessee. His father died 3 months before David was born. His mother died from complications after David’s birth. His car: a steel-blue 1967 Shelby Mustang GT500.
He is a champion archer, great at shooting paper targets, but his love for living creatures makes it impossible to shoot and kill. He’s secretly in love with his best friend, Charlotte, and his OCD tends to get him in sticky spots. He takes pride in his appearance, is always stylish. He can be short-tempered, stubborn, and quick to judge, but those traits are quickly squelched when thrust into the care of Sir Trogsdill Domnall, a highly respected and lethal knight of the kingdom of Hirth. David may not be fond of Trog’s methods of teaching, but when he comes face to face with two enemies determined to kill him, David realizes Trog may not be such a bad teacher after all.
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David woke upon a straw mattress in a moon-lit room cluttered with strange items. Braided vines hung from the rafters, piles of river rocks and unusual stones, talons, teeth and amulets perched on weather-beaten shelves. Sloughed reptilian skins hung like party streamers from the ceiling while red and black ink blot paintings clung to the walls at a tilt. A high-backed rocking chair sat in the corner like a lone, forgotten figure, its seat in bad need of repair. Soft moonlight reflected off the water in the basin, casting ripples of glimmering brilliance upon the planked walls.
A knock on the door broke his concentration. He flung his long legs over the edge and sat up as the gangling, paper-thin stranger entered carrying a wooden bowl and mug, both with knots, branches and leaves protruding from their sides. He set them on a nearby round table, along with a lit candle, its yellow wax dripping like lemon tears down its tapered form.
“I have brought you nourishment.” His voice was soothing, lyrical, like the gurgle of a babbling brook on a Spring day. “I figured you could do with some stickies on your insides. I have drawn you a warm bath. It awaits you at the end of the hall. Fresh clothes are on the chest at the foot of the bed. Take your time. When you are done, come downstairs. We have much to discuss.” The stranger turned to leave.
“Wait.” David stood and swept aside fringes of dark hair clumped together by briars. “Who are you? What are you?”
The stranger flashed a mouth of paper-flat teeth. “My name is Finnegan. Finnegan Aginagin and I am a sestra, an emissary of the mages. You may call me Finn.”
Intriguing character sketch–love the deviant art image. 🙂
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David sounds like a wonderfully complex character and the scene definitely has me wanting to read more.
The image you chose for him is gorgeous and his car is perfect. It’s so much fun finding pics of things in a fictional piece to help us visually create the scenes and characters, isn’t it?
You had great imagery in the scene. I especially liked how the ‘sloughed reptilian skins hung like party streamers’. I could really see that in my head! 🙂
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Stickies — Tee He. I always liked this scene. I’m glad it made it into the final version.
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I loved the scene, too, especially since it comes right after that scene where you know who almost finds you know who. 😮
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Ha! So cryptic. 🙂
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The mustang is somewhat like one we had “back in the day”. David and his mustang kind of reminds me of my 17 year old grandson.
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I LOVE the car. It’s as if I’m living my life vicariously through David.
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I love the car too. I imagine he drives really fast too.
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Great introduction to your character!
Mary Montague Sikes
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Hmmm. Sestra. Second time in two days that I have come across that word. It’s not in my dictionary, but I am getting a feel for it. Thanks.
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uh oh. Someone else has a sestra? hmmmm….do you remember what you read with the Sestra in it? I thought I’d made that up.
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What an interesting character! 🙂
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Your characters have a strong presence. There is such a good feel for what your characters want and will be like in the story.
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Thanks, Joe.
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Intriguing! In love with Charlotte ~ mmmm… Mustang! Smitten! 😉
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Yes, he’s got it pretty bad for both. 🙂
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I loveeeeee the stang! Omg! I wish I had the luxury to drive such hotness when I was 18! 🙂 The teaser was very intriguing! Thanks for sharing!
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Yes, I’m rather partial to the ‘stang, too. My dream car. How could I NOT give him one to drive. 🙂 Thanks for stopping by.
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I quite like David. He’s a lovely lad and I could easily see myself rooting for him.
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I hope so. He’s quirky but down to earth, too.
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