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The time has come for my First Campaigner Challenge, woot!!! The Challenge is:
Write a short story/flash fiction story in 200 words or less, excluding the title. It can be in any format, including a poem. Begin the story with the words, “Shadows crept across the wall”. These five words will be included in the word count.
If you want to give yourself an added challenge (optional), do one or more of these:
- end the story with the words: “everything faded.” (also included in the word count)
- include the word “orange” in the story
- write in the same genre you normally write
- make your story 200 words exactly!
Shadows crept across the wall.
I sat up in bed, my covers drawn to my chin. I shivered from the cold…and fear. Please, tell me he hasn’t found me again. I stared at the patch of stumpwork roses on my coverlet. No. He couldn’t have. The fortress is protected. I saw the sorcerer, Graffus, weave the spell himself. But what else could project its winged shadow on the solar walls?
I threw the covers off and tiptoed to the window, the stone floor like ice against my bare feet. The castle rose like a giant spiked beast from the ground in the moonlight. It was the first time I’d seen the stronghold from this vantage point since I arrived yesterday morning. The Baroness and her handmaiden found me alongside the road to Coryt, battered and near death, a victim of his attack. I don’t remember much of what happened, just strong arms and beautiful but dangerous green eyes.
Footsteps pounded the hall and stopped outside my door. I spun around, my breath caught in my chest.
“Who’s there?” I shouted.
The door opened. The last thing I saw were those green eyes and a breath of orange flame.
Everything faded.
Very, very good. It left me wanting so much more:)
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This story piques my interest! Well done. (#112)
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Quite a bit going on: nicely done.
Tale Spinning, #58
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I like the sound of his green eyes!
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Great imagery and story, and I normally amn’t interested in fantasy! It makes me wonder what happens next.
I’m #123.
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Great job with this! 🙂
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Jenny, my story should be working now, although I had to put up my link again. Hope you can find it!
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I like this. I just wish there was more! Good job!
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Some nice language and imagery. I have no idea what “stumpwork roses” are, but I like the sound of that detail.
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Jenny! You’re doing the Campaign! I love your story!
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This is really cool. Great job.
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Ooo, I love settings like this.
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I loved this! I’m stopping by from the Platform Campaign. You have a great blog. ~Cheers
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Thanks, Chris. I hope you stop by again sometime.
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Nice metaphor for the castle. Is the green-eyed thing a dragon? Flames and all…
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a human-morphing dragon, actually. 🙂
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Loved it, Jenny. This is turning out to be so much fun!
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Great visual treat.
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I think this works well as flash fiction, but you also have the potential to build on it for a larger story.
#83
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yep that floor was cold – good imagery
I’m #103
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This seems like my kind of story. I would like to keep reading! Nice post!
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Nice! I sense a larger story to this flash piece. =)
Dropping by to say hi from campaigner group #1. Nice to meet and follow you!
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“…just strong arms and beautiful but dangerous green eyes.” Yep, that would do it. 😉 Great piece.
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Very riviting. I was hanging on every word. Mine is # 71
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Well done! I enjoyed it! 🙂
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Nice job! It makes me wonder what will happen next! 🙂
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Oh! Great job! I love the setting! I feel like I don’t get to read enough of these stories!
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Great imagery. I enjoyed reading your entry for the challenge.
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Yeah… Sorcerers! Really, really liked it.
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Intriguing. And those green eyes sound gorgeous despite how dangerous their owner appear to be!
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Very nice and atmospheric. Like others have said, it sounds like part of a larger work and it’s fun to leave the reader to imagine the rest of the story – I think that’s a mark of a successful flash piece.
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thank you, Nick. I wrote it in about 20 minutes this morning just for this occasion. I may revisit it at some point and continue the story.
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Oo, I’m curious now! Great work, Jenny! 🙂
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Thank you, Carrie! And thank you for stopping by.
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I want a description of the rest of mysterious green eyes. Great scene.
~#14
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Fun story. What happens next with Graffus the sorcerer?
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I don’t know. 🙂 I’ll have to revisit him sometime.
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i hope its a dragon! suspenseful! good job =)
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Very nice story with great visual that drew me right in!
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thank you, Ann.
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How do you find the time to do it all! Blogging, mothering, writing a novel, taking on these sporadic challenges that arise during the week! You are a force to be reckoned with, Ms. Jenny Keller-Ford 🙂
Great story! (I would have used every last word, too!)
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And you are pure light and inspiration, not to mention, great for my ego! 🙂 Hope you are having a splendid day. It’s beautiful here in sunny Florida. In fact, I think I’ll take a walk. 🙂
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I am, thank you! It’s a little cool here in CA, but I am tucked away writing for the day, so I don’t mind too terribly much. Enjoy your walk, my friend 🙂
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You had me a castles and spiked beasts. 🙂 Would love to read the whole story if there is one. 🙂
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Unfortunately, this was a piece written for this challenge. I do have another one, though, that is finished and you can read the first page here
Thanks for stopping by and reading my little blurb.
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I like this!!
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I should have known this, but I had to look up “coverlet.” Awesome array of elements you’ve woven into this entry. Nice one! 🙂
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I´d also would have kept reading! 😀 It amazes me how in 200 words, you can create such a world and anticipation in the reader! Very well done, Jenny!
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Thank you, my dear. 🙂 You’re pretty good at writing, too, you know!
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Nice work but it seems something is missing at the end. It reads like a part from something bigger. I’d read more.
Mine is No. 23
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thanks. I still haven’t gained full control of flash fiction. I can’t seem to keep my thoughts down to 200 words. I always want to keep going. That’s why these exercises are so good at honing certain skills. Thanks for dropping by!
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Sorry, I’ve been away for a while. I too find flash fiction terribly hard to do, but I find that my everyday writing gets better when I try. So keep working on it. 😉
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Me too! I really wish there was more of the story!! You’ve got me hooked!! Great job!
I’m entry #19
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Cool! I wished there was more. I’d have kept reading. 🙂
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Green eyes and a breath of Orange fire??
Fortress, Sorcerer, …. My goodness!! You really can create a great story!! Awesome!!
Nice work!!
Another Author
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What great imagery like “stumpwork roses on my coverlet” and “giant spiked beast” to bring this to life.
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