First Page Contest – Judged by author of Halflings, Heather Burch

Today Jamie Ayres is hosting a first-page contest on her blog, to be judged by author Heather Burch. Five random winners will receive a personal critique from Ms. Burch.

[Since the contest is over, my novel’s first page has been removed for copyright and future publishing reasons.  The comments still remain. Feb 22, 2012]