I am trying to perfect my tagline to enter into a contest and I need your help. I’m sorry I don’t have anything to offer for your help except to return the favor should you find yourself in a writing jam.
After a similar poll yesterday, I discovered the tagline I had was mediocre at best, so, I saved all your comments, erased the post and started over. The following came to me at 4 a.m. this morning and I really like it. I would like to know if it would catch your interest as well. As always, comments are welcome.
After being kidnapped and thrust into a world steeped in magic and murder, millionaire teen, David Heiland, is forced to defend a realm besieged by a vengeful dragon and a narcissistic sorcerer. Only an absolute victory will provide a path back home.