New upload of Chapter One

So, taking the advice of a wonderful agent I had the opportunity to work with recently, I have revamped my Chapter 1 (which also meant revamping the next 4 chapters) to give it more ‘girl appeal’.  I hope I have succeeded.  Of course, comments are always welcomed.  You can find it under the heading of my novel above or along the right sidebar.

Happy reading and thanks for stopping by!  🙂