Several weeks ago I asked for authors to come up with a way to describe the following:
A guy standing on a thin layer of snow in his bare feet, shivering, bouncing on the balls of his feet as if the snow were hot coals, before he runs back inside his house. Need one short, upbeat sentence that shows, not tells…..
The winner of the contest would get a free content edit of his or her first chapter.
And now the moment you’ve all been waiting for.
The winner is (drum roll please) . . . Pam Howes!
Woo Hoo!! Congratulations, Pam. Please look for an e-mail from me regarding the piece you would like edited.
A big round of applause to everyone who participated. I loved all the suggestions!! You guys rock.